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The Comedown (Free verse) by Corey McHattan
That sticky-backed slick black bile-
Feeling, oozing, sickly
Juices gurgling, flowing, thickly
Gassing, building
Palms prickly.
Clenching. Stilling.
Endless stoic silence, holding.
Claiming moments
Gloaming gibbous,
Dreaming silver shards, and bound excess,
Streaming bloody mucus;
Headbent bulbous.
Sticking, sliding, clammy drooling
Coiling wily arching, spastic sooling
Fading, vomit pooling...
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.25
Weighted score: 4.7913947
Overall Rank: 11212
Posted: August 15, 2002 8:38 PM PDT; Last modified: August 15, 2002 8:38 PM PDT
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