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The Comedown (Free verse) by Corey McHattan
That sticky-backed slick black bile- Feeling, oozing, sickly Juices gurgling, flowing, thickly Gassing, building Palms prickly. Clenching. Stilling. Endless stoic silence, holding. Claiming moments Gloaming gibbous, Dreaming silver shards, and bound excess, Streaming bloody mucus; Headbent bulbous. Sticking, sliding, clammy drooling Coiling wily arching, spastic sooling Fading, vomit pooling...

Up the ladder: Making Love
Down the ladder: caught in the dark

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.25
Weighted score: 4.7913947
Overall Rank: 11207
Posted: August 15, 2002 8:38 PM PDT; Last modified: August 15, 2002 8:38 PM PDT
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