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The Comedown

Member since 2002 · Posted 15 Aug 2002 · 0 comments

That sticky-backed slick black bile- Feeling, oozing, sickly Juices gurgling, flowing, thickly Gassing, building Palms prickly. Clenching. Stilling. Endless stoic silence, holding. Claiming moments Gloaming gibbous, Dreaming silver shards, and bound excess, Streaming bloody mucus; Headbent bulbous. Sticking, sliding, clammy drooling Coiling wily arching, spastic sooling Fading, vomit pooling...

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