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Making Love (Free verse) by LucidRevelation

As I lay naked Your fingers trace my outline illuminated by the glow of the candle Lightly caressing every crevice every intricate, private space and place the makes me whole. My body stretches to reach your touch savoring every second every skin to skin moment where our moist bodies glide together creating one whole out of two equal parts

William Delacroix 1-Oct-03/2:42 AM
More bodily fluids, please.




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