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Free verse № 50420

Tomorrow

by Katie

Member since 2002 · Posted 27 May 2003 · 7 comments

Walking under a moon full of regret, Holding the tears of sorrow, Pain I won’t soon forget. They say,‘ just wait until tomorrow, The rain will dry, And the sun will shine.’ But I have no time to lend or borrow, I can’t wait for tomorrow… For that day isn’t’ promised Did you ever think, ‘What if my tomorrow isn’t alive, And you never got to kiss me goodbye?’ Did I ever wonder,‘What if your tomorrow is dead and gone… And I didn’t tell you --- I’m still in love…

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7 comments

[6] Christof 27-May-03/9:07 AM Reply
The best thing here is the line 'I have no time to lend or borrow' - reminds me of a folk song or something - but the idea of time as a commodity is surprisingly deep here.
[10] wCUNTw 27-May-03/9:09 AM Reply
I love Katie. 10.
[8] horus8 27-May-03/10:54 AM Reply
Ahhhhhhh <toot>.

Best you've written, yet. Whether tomorrows alive or dead.
[9] thepinkbunnyofdoom 27-May-03/12:42 PM Reply
Sweetly and intensely deep and meaningful. -9-
[10] Miggy 27-May-03/12:58 PM Reply
this is perfect. That's all I have to say
[10] Stephen Robins 1-Oct-03/8:13 AM Reply
Tomorrow I will re-read your poem and come again.
[0] <{Baba^Yaga}> 23-Oct-03/12:30 PM Reply
A winged penis in a tank full of pirahanas.