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Tomorrow (Free verse) by Katie
Walking under a moon full of regret, Holding the tears of sorrow, Pain I won’t soon forget. They say,‘ just wait until tomorrow, The rain will dry, And the sun will shine.’ But I have no time to lend or borrow, I can’t wait for tomorrow… For that day isn’t’ promised Did you ever think, ‘What if my tomorrow isn’t alive, And you never got to kiss me goodbye?’ Did I ever wonder,‘What if your tomorrow is dead and gone… And I didn’t tell you --- I’m still in love…

Up the ladder: Make a wish
Down the ladder: becoming

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.9375
Weighted score: 6.7065444
Overall Rank: 502
Posted: May 27, 2003 8:59 AM PDT; Last modified: May 27, 2003 8:59 AM PDT
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[6] Christof @ 217.44.71.83 | 27-May-03/9:07 AM | Reply
The best thing here is the line 'I have no time to lend or borrow' - reminds me of a folk song or something - but the idea of time as a commodity is surprisingly deep here.
[10] wCUNTw @ 195.157.153.253 | 27-May-03/9:09 AM | Reply
I love Katie. 10.
[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 27-May-03/10:54 AM | Reply
Ahhhhhhh <toot>.

Best you've written, yet. Whether tomorrows alive or dead.
[9] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.21.223 | 27-May-03/12:42 PM | Reply
Sweetly and intensely deep and meaningful. -9-
[10] Miggy @ 207.38.251.108 | 27-May-03/12:58 PM | Reply
this is perfect. That's all I have to say
[10] Stephen Robins @ 213.253.24.101 | 1-Oct-03/8:13 AM | Reply
Tomorrow I will re-read your poem and come again.
[0] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 23-Oct-03/12:30 PM | Reply
A winged penis in a tank full of pirahanas.
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