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Make a wish (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
Pour me another glass of apathy Shower me with your indifferent shrugs Give me that cold shoulder of yours Its high time I popped it in the microwave I’m sic of missing you laugh So why am I writing my epitaph? Simply said I’m better off dead That moaning for you in my sleep Shooting stars Make a wish Hope they don’t start shooting back Cause then we’d be avoiding more than one another Running for our lives Shouting at the top of our lungs The sky is falling Chicken Little run Can you imagine the look on people’s faces?

Up the ladder: Typical Day
Down the ladder: Tomorrow

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.9375
Weighted score: 6.7065444
Overall Rank: 501
Posted: May 20, 2003 2:01 PM PDT; Last modified: May 20, 2003 2:01 PM PDT
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[7] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 20-May-03/3:12 PM | Reply
Angels and dinosaurs.
[10] deleted user @ 63.237.171.99 | 21-May-03/12:23 PM | Reply
You know, Darlin', I never paid much attention to disrhythmic poems until your generation came along. And you are head and shoulders above the crowd. Next, please!
[7] blurryphotograph @ 24.163.40.238 | 25-May-03/11:22 AM | Reply
"pour me a glass of apathy"

ha..great opening line..

..7?
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