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2 AM (Other) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
Its 2 am sleep no where in sight Right now i wish that you were right Cause then i wouldn't be sitting here I wouldn't shed these useless tears Hows crying going to change anything? As i sit here in my room, all i think about, is you And more and more, i realise, i love you Right now I'm living in my own hell Remembering those oh so many nights ago When you still told me you loved me so But who still loves who? So why am I pouring my heart out to someone whose not there? Wasting my breath on someone who doesn't care? Talking to myself and the open night air Why haven't i moved on? What else could be wrong? If i could have my wish, just one It'd be to relive a day when you still loved me Feel the love inside your every kiss Realise what i know i'm going to miss And as the day comes to a close I'd say all those things i've longed to say Then hold on to the memory

Down the ladder: Tryst

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.736842
Weighted score: 6.654471
Overall Rank: 549
Posted: January 27, 2003 1:42 PM PST; Last modified: February 1, 2003 1:34 PM PST
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[n/a] d35 @ 169.244.70.147 | 1-Oct-03/8:22 AM | Reply
i like it, somewhere there it reminds me of something, where and what idk, tho it is there >8<
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