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Battered moon (Free verse) by revy13
Ooze of magma singes my body,
for all the energies used reminds
me of your insecurities.
My body hurts
being stoned by the fist of your emotions,
I cannot get up.
Hurricanes of violence flow
from your soft, pink pale lips
slapping me in my face so hard
that I cannot flicker my eyes to face
the demon which hides in your flesh
and my head hurts,
yearning for you to stop..PLEASE STOP!!!
Please, I promise to be a good boy! (sighing)
the flood of unformed waste of emotions
flow from my eyes and out through the
crimson red of blood out of my body.
My body cannot feel no more.
For no matter what Roger,
I will always love you
even when I feel your arms around me
and your tone has changed,
your physical energies overcome the chaos
it has wrought,
and the angelic form
has come to bless you and ask for Forgivenss,
I am not a pigskin stuffed bag;
ready to punch and kick whenever you are angry,
for after the medicineman has chanted his last healing dance,
after his last...
many moons ago
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Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7051
Posted: October 1, 2003 9:03 AM PDT; Last modified: October 2, 2003 9:40 AM PDT
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