poemranker ::This > That...Why? by MacFrantic

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Free verse № 97290

This > That...Why?

Member since 2003 · Posted 16 Apr 2004 · Edited 28 Jan 2005 · 2 comments

Shake your stuff maybe It's alright Dance under the moonlight Spend your time Just getting there Bright beloved With calloused hands Don't work so hard Because the tellers and the sellers Will not dispute the song-spellers Who are off enough as it is So sped the animals from the wild and set to practice Ezra's style

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[8] deleted user 16-Apr-04/8:40 PM Reply
Live life fast and get more life. Is that it? Well you've said it well, but it doesn't fit my frying pan. Slow and easy gets more done, I say.
[7] wilco 28-Jan-05/6:42 PM Reply
Not lovin' this one as much. Not too bad, but doesn't really stand out.