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This > That...Why? (Free verse) by MacFrantic Shake your stuff maybe
It's alright
Dance under the moonlight
Spend your time
Just getting there
Bright beloved
With calloused hands
Don't work so hard
Because the tellers and the sellers
Will not dispute the song-spellers
Who are off enough as it is
So sped the animals from the wild
and set to practice Ezra's style
Up the ladder:
Unfinished
Down the ladder:
Darkest Room
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Posted: April 16, 2004 8:26 PM PDT; Last modified: January 28, 2005 10:30 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.0397344 Overall Rank: 7146 Comments:
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16-Apr-04/8:40 PM
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Live life fast and get more life. Is that it? Well you've said it well, but it doesn't fit my frying pan. Slow and easy gets more done, I say.
Not lovin' this one as much. Not too bad, but doesn't really stand out.
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