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Darkest Room (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul
Darkest room in the house,
No light or people can be seen
No noise or voices can be heard
and if not for my heartbeat's echo
I'm not sure I would exist
Voices in my head
talk as though they are my friends,
Reality is suppressed as my dreams
slowly creep to the surface
As I live in this dreamworld
I occassionally wake up to see
what I left behind in the first place
Everyone wants to know why I'm not happy
But nobody wants to give me a reason why I should be
Tears slowly run down my face because I finally
realize that which makes me happy doesn't really
exist
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7156
Posted: November 18, 2003 3:49 PM PST; Last modified: November 18, 2003 3:49 PM PST
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