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Don't Touch Me! (Free verse) by elderking
suprised he would chastise:
her once eager hands flutter nervously,
slow to settle into bewildered rest;
compliant fingers startled still,
curl as cowards into pensive palms.
meek hands seek deeper pockets
and are never seen again.
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Posted: December 27, 2005 2:35 PM PST; Last modified: December 27, 2005 2:35 PM PST
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