Don't Touch Me!

Member since 2005 · Posted 27 Dec 2005 · 1 comment

suprised he would chastise: her once eager hands flutter nervously, slow to settle into bewildered rest; compliant fingers startled still, curl as cowards into pensive palms. meek hands seek deeper pockets and are never seen again.

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[8] Niphredil 30-Dec-05/3:15 AM Reply

Interesting, I liked the poem. I also enjoyed the occasional alliteration :-)