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Don't Touch Me! (Free verse) by elderking
suprised he would chastise: her once eager hands flutter nervously, slow to settle into bewildered rest; compliant fingers startled still, curl as cowards into pensive palms. meek hands seek deeper pockets and are never seen again.

Down the ladder: natural

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7082
Posted: December 27, 2005 2:35 PM PST; Last modified: December 27, 2005 2:35 PM PST
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[8] Niphredil @ 192.114.44.176 | 30-Dec-05/3:15 AM | Reply
Interesting, I liked the poem. I also enjoyed the occasional alliteration :-)
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