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late night delirium (Free verse) by not_a_philosopher if you call yourself an atheist
then chances are won't have any idea
what I'm talkijg about
and are likely to think I'm crazy
(I am)
but staying on topic,
what I'm really trying to say is
that I started talking to my cieling last night
and fell asleep holding a bible
that I don't believe in
it was strange, to be honest
and I felt rather stupid
but all the same,
I wouldn't prefer it any other way
because
it's nice to think to yourself that either you know
something wonderful that all else have missed
or that you are really insane
and they haven't found out yet.
Up the ladder:
catastrophe
Down the ladder:
Journey
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Posted: April 2, 2005 11:59 AM PST; Last modified: April 2, 2005 11:59 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.0397344 Overall Rank: 7150 Comments:
Yeah, we're not likely to understand, especially considering this exact idea has been overdiscussed since Torah times.
Right now you're in the transitional phase between Judaism and Christianity. Keep reading the Bible, and keep praying. You'll get there in the end, and when you do you'll know what it means to be at One with Jesus. Thank you and God Bless.
you make me feel very uncomfortable when you say things like that.
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Other than that, this is almost more of a blog post than a poem. Look me in the eye and tell me otherwise if I'm mistaken.
"it's nice to think to yourself
that either you know something wonderful
that all else have missed"
Minus the quotation marks, thats how those lines should be broke.
<3 Jason