thepinkbunnyofdoom2 Apr 2005

Spell Check, Please. Verse 1 Line 2. Reread that. Actually, on second thought, reread before you post. Thats what the whole page to review before submission is all about. So that you can take a quick reread and catch the obivious spelling mistakes, i.e. "talkijg".

Other than that, this is almost more of a blog post than a poem. Look me in the eye and tell me otherwise if I'm mistaken.

"it's nice to think to yourself
that either you know something wonderful
that all else have missed"

Minus the quotation marks, thats how those lines should be broke.

<3 Jason