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Invisible (Other) by BrandonW
Suppose I wasn't invisible I might take your hand I might have a name, a scar, a brand Well, I am invisible And it's easy not to see That I may be invisible, but I still bleed Suppose I had the voice to say "you'll see" Suppose I had the lungs to help me breathe Looking over your shoulder You turn back just to peek Has someone been following? No, its just me I've watched in through your window I've peered into your dreams Mainly I've been watching, while you weep Suppose I had the strength to make believe That I am more than just a memory

Up the ladder: UNTITLED
Down the ladder: Miles Apart, You Say

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7102
Posted: November 3, 2004 9:08 PM PST; Last modified: November 3, 2004 9:08 PM PST
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