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hopscotch rocks (Lyric) by FreeFormFixation
Sop up the water
lapping at the basement walls.
The bricks have all gone soft.
And let a breath of fresh air
tear the place apart.
Now their voices can pour
down the stairs.
One pass,
you've cleaned it out.
Soon a crowd is
tumbling down.
They're wrapping 'round
your arms and legs.
Is that okay with you?
And for a moment it's just
callow cacophony.
Then, silence.
No, song and
singing and smiling.
The darkest part of your house
harbors a pillar of strength.
A column wound up in vines
of music.
A column wound up tight
in vines of music.
A column wound up tight
in vines of music.
Concrete crumbling
ceiling sagging.
You've seen people you love
mouth your name on the
highway,
as they thumbed toward your car.
To be tossed underhand;
Hopscotch rocks in your driveway.
Where once they bumped with you
into your basement walls
until the ceiling sunk.
Jumped up and down until
you felt your stomach scrunch;
Where are they now?
Oh, you're better off
not knowing.
Yeah, you're better off.
People you love
cut a path to the staircase
as you rush toward the door.
Pick up your chalk,
write their names in the driveway.
And let them hold the floor
instead of basement walls,
hold up the house.
Stick up your hand and grab
a bit of basement wall,
live in the now.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7130
Posted: May 26, 2007 8:59 AM PDT; Last modified: May 26, 2007 9:12 AM PDT
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other than those blips, this is an evocative series of images.