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This > That...Why? (Free verse) by MacFrantic

Shake your stuff maybe It's alright Dance under the moonlight Spend your time Just getting there Bright beloved With calloused hands Don't work so hard Because the tellers and the sellers Will not dispute the song-spellers Who are off enough as it is So sped the animals from the wild and set to practice Ezra's style

wilco 28-Jan-05/6:42 PM
Not lovin' this one as much. Not too bad, but doesn't really stand out.




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