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This is for you (Free verse) by zixxee
The blade is cold. Pressure I feel on my skin. The pain is pleasure. This must be a sin. I bleed for you. My blood is yours. The hate overwhelms me and life closes its doors.

Down the ladder: Battered moon

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7050
Posted: September 30, 2003 2:48 PM PDT; Last modified: September 30, 2003 2:48 PM PDT
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