I really enjoyed how you capitalized Certain words for emphasis in your poem. I found it mildly original, and passively Bold.

The poem is good. Reading it just made me wanna cry. It hits home for many people

Poems are words that are from our imagination, some are more towards reality and some are from a whole different planet. This poem isn't exactly true to life but it captured my attention and emotions. Good job!

I find homosexuality to be a splendid substitute to the common stink cunt. On the other hand, I found heterosexuality to be a flashy way to procreate and feel like you've really contributed something to this spinning mound of colonizing bacteria we call the human experience on earth. I think in the end, yes, I'd much rather scrape a pipe than scrape a cervex or a perneum, any day.

I think this is super super funny. LOL Full 9

Yes, that's the way it is with 'them lambs' So when they go baah? You really shouldn't be shocked... That's what they do.

An m-100 makes more of a pro harvest statement.

Such pain and woe for one so young. Tsk, what sweet lord has the world come to? Also, I enjoyed when you rhymed pain with rain. I thought, hey, now that's brash.

One should kill randomly without personal ties to the victim. Otherwise, it's just another lame boring crime of jealous genitalia.

Right now? We're wishing you had a friend too. It would spare us the trouble of foraging through your rubbish for a reason. A reason to why and how you've made it this far without losing a limb or accidentilly blaming the world for your stupidity. unless you have, then naturally, I apologize.

I once wrote a better poem than this by tossing a sack full of letters out into the market place and asking a passing monkey to transcribe them using his typewriter.

This is the best poem about a pipecleaner I have ever seen. I especially like the way you use "inner thighs" to represent the main chute of the pipe, and the burning coffee for the tobacco.

I like this poem. It also almost reminds me of that one cartoon "Courage the Cowardly Dog". I mean that in a good way! I give you a 10!

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i think that coming right out with cognizance of your disorder ruins the surprise, lee. it's quite entertaining, the 'or so they say' refrain. but the opening needs work. imo.

rockmage--nice images here. my one critque would be the rat-a-tat-tat rhymtmic structure. weave it. put the chisels, rasps, and saws away ,and get yourself a loom. you've got some fine wool to warp, here.

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line breaks--why? no werkie, comme ca.

I love pumpkin bowling umm why is there a penis?

I feel that there is something missing too. It does need to describe the 'beautiful scars'. But other than that it was very good.