Re: A Permanent Fixture by wilco	Jill Stockinger 127.0.0.1	27-Dec-20/4:56 PM
(its dying- no apostrophe in this case)
Re: Tennessee by wilco	Jill Stockinger 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	28-Dec-20/1:40 PM
moved by this. Good imagery.
Re: apathy by lexicon	Jill Stockinger 127.0.0.1	28-Dec-20/1:40 PM
Certainly agree with the sentiment!
Re: Star Studded Supermarket by [mojo]	Jill Stockinger 127.0.0.1	28-Dec-20/1:52 PM
Imaginative, humorous!
Re: unsung love by khuscen	Jill Stockinger 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	28-Dec-20/2:05 PM
(some die, not dies)
Re: The Symbol by Dovina	Jill Stockinger 127.0.0.1	28-Dec-20/2:07 PM
Well done!
Re: Captian, Doctor..Father by celticskatermatt1	Jill Stockinger 127.0.0.1	28-Dec-20/2:10 PM
Captain--not captian...
Re: Forever Lasting by ChefKSP	Jill Stockinger 127.0.0.1	28-Dec-20/2:16 PM
Taking the first word from every stanza (an acrostic of sorts): I will always feel complete while you're in my life.
Re: Sleeping Beauty by fevriere	Jill Stockinger 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	28-Dec-20/2:16 PM
Enjoyed this!
Re: the absent-minded walk on the proverbial mountainside of nothingness + my mother's old tampons by skaskowski	Jill Stockinger 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	28-Dec-20/2:42 PM
Loved the rhythm! You maintained it beautifully!
Re: exploration of entirety by skaskowski	Jill Stockinger 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	28-Dec-20/2:47 PM
some good imagery
Re: B.F. by skaskowski	Jill Stockinger 127.0.0.1	28-Dec-20/2:56 PM
Love the last stanza!
Re: submission to decay by FreeFormFixation	Jill Stockinger 127.0.0.1	28-Dec-20/3:08 PM
like the idea and this has some very good lines.
Re: Bashing through the woods by INTRANSIT	Jill Stockinger 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	28-Dec-20/5:00 PM
Cute! Especially the image of the snake classroom at the end!
Re: Poem on a face by INTRANSIT	Jill Stockinger 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	28-Dec-20/5:03 PM
He WAS caged for treason.
Re: Grind by INTRANSIT	Jill Stockinger 127.0.0.1	28-Dec-20/5:06 PM
Love the last 2 lines.
Re: The consistency of frailty by INTRANSIT	Jill Stockinger 127.0.0.1	28-Dec-20/5:12 PM
(gurney)
Re: For my wife by INTRANSIT	Jill Stockinger 127.0.0.1	28-Dec-20/5:18 PM
dove's wing needs an apostrophe
Re: the product of repetition by nentwined	nentwined 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	29-Dec-20/11:52 AM
https://madewithcollab.com/collab/W00k80w00h1
Re: Cockroaches by Jill Stockinger	Dovina 127.0.0.1	29-Dec-20/1:57 PM
I imagine this being about poems that write, usually after considerable wine, and read the next day before they have escaped to somewhere, and they are like cockroaches--slimy infectious creatures. I keep them though, tuck them away for they are part of me, and in the right light and the right revision might become. Become what? Nothing probably, but who knows.