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Poem on a face (Free verse) by INTRANSIT I wish I were as ugly
As Dr. Pound.
Insane people have been locked up for less
than he has said.
Take a line from his gotee
and one from his nose
they intersect sharp
like a dagger
and his poems are as blunt
as torpedoes.
Up the ladder:
To Making Do
Down the ladder:
Red
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Posted: April 3, 2005 3:04 PM PDT; Last modified: April 3, 2005 3:04 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0238404 Overall Rank: 7436 Comments:
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thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 4.224.24.70
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3-Apr-05/7:05 PM
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Its "Goatee". -6-
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edpeterson @ 68.79.6.28
> thepinkbunnyofdoom
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4-Apr-05/6:07 AM
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It's "It's"
A nice mix of physical and verbal ugliness. It seems the last line might keep some of that.
He WAS caged for treason.
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