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Forever Lasting (Other) by ChefKSP
I can’t stand the fact your not here, I want your presences forever lasting, I will go without food just to hear your voice sing the most soothing melody, I will forever keep your most inner emotions on mind at all times, Will you sacrifice your hate you have to create more love, Will you forget built up feelings from previous loved ones, Will we ever have love that’s uniquely one of a kind, Will we have an inseparable connection that bonds us together again and again. Always will feel you in my arms night by night there is no day where I leave from ur side, Always have time for the one that unleashed the love that I hide inside, Always remember there is no other, none can come between what was meant to last forever, Always will be inspired by the release of true feelings that dwell from within Feel me touch your heart and remember there is no me and you it’s always us, Feel the unforgettable nights deep within our minds and remember love completes one another, Feel every word to realize there are feelings from deep deep inside that will never hide again, Feel your most inner thoughts and allow your self to be loved for who you are, Complete love will become one heart that will never apart, Complete souls will make a star shine and glitter for life, Complete harmony can only come at a price of losing our most common feeling, Complete silence is the only time where I know we’re thinking of each other, While you’re on my mind I don’t wanna lose or find your hurt deep inside, While I’m thinking of you I get this tingling feeling all over, means I’m full of feelings that words can’t describe, it’s like I’ve never been this happy before, While sitting alone here all I can do is think about you and what I wanna do with you, While you’re on my mind all I can think to say to you is how much I want you, Your deepest thought will always mean more then words to me, Your most sincere words will always have a powerful meaning behind it and remain passionate, Your very existence means a lot to me cause I don’t feel alone while ur there for me, Your soul is searching for the connection that is forever lasting, In this entire world people will never have the same connection that we have for eternity, In my world from when I was born I was searching till now for I found you, In this time of lost souls there is very few that can find what we have, In times of depression our souls is the only medicine with the cure of a companion, My very existence has nothing but confusion when I’m alone, My confusion is a lost soul, My soul is forever looking for you, My Life is dedicated to my dreams and hopes, Life is a chance to grow a soul, Life lived for others is a life worthwhile, Life without love is a life’s loss, Life is the begin of love. Chef KSP Within this poem there is a hidden message Can you find it

Up the ladder: The Missing Peace
Down the ladder: Chronic Depression

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.428571
Weighted score: 4.846319
Overall Rank: 10615
Posted: September 8, 2004 3:23 PM PDT; Last modified: September 8, 2004 3:23 PM PDT
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[n/a] LintyWeenis @ 152.163.253.1 | 8-Sep-04/3:54 PM | Reply
I Will Always Feel Complete While Your In My Life.
Yep.
[1] klosterfobik @ 64.12.116.140 | 8-Sep-04/4:37 PM | Reply
I found the hidden message!Is it you markedly suck?
Stick to cooking Chef KSP!
[0] Sasha @ 69.138.240.116 | 9-Sep-04/6:29 PM | Reply
Life without love is a life's loss?????

God. Look, Chef, why don't you send this dribble you cooked up to Chicken Soup for the Teenage Soul XXXVII. I believe they have an opening, as they always do, for shit that rambles, rhymes, and really means absolutely nothing. Go ahead. You're hurting the internet.
[6] Jill Stockinger @ 127.0.0.1 | 28-Dec-20/2:16 PM | Reply
Taking the first word from every stanza (an acrostic of sorts):
I will always feel complete while you're in my life.
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