Loved the opening but s2 ruined the feeling - damn ! You have potential and i'd love to see a more concise version. If you open as strongly as this you must close as strong (or more) 7

2 - unfair man ! This is a glammed up thought process but the end intrigues me. 6

Wow i was number 2 for 49 mins. I must find that romanian vintage.

Wild - I love it Good show.

Though I dislike your attitude I must say a 4 is unfair. I actually think this shows a side to of you I like and the word play is good. TAstes like diamonds I don't get? ________8________

For your young years you are a fine writer. I am mr pig too joe joe.

I like it, but, why is Jesu your only salvation, or abysmal help? Some consider Lucifer to be the Guiding Light. Once embraced - one sees the Light, the Path from the abyss. Interesting context indeed.

Mmmmm.... "Mutton Biceps". You're chasing that with whine I hope.

Lot of ideas and solid facts here.

"The seperation is gaining speed at this point in time, so I pick to lose my path for it was ever mine."

Not bad at all my furry friend. Long time no see. Blessed with eight.

btw - I like this. Has an unforced flow to it.

Nicely constructed, if a tad long.

I don't think you mention "the light" enough times.

What did I just read?

Nice and simple.

I prefer the smell of Lever 2000.

Lets have one toghether* Cheers good worck. I dont like to think about it either but...the lobster was good, so was the stephen king..I'll drink to that!

I like better, the one about those 2 Canadian boys(poemwankers), at Deadman's Point.

Awwww girrrrll you had to go there didn't sha?That''seedy'' sermon should never touch your lips unless it was angelic revelation in c minor heh..heh..you is a lil devil.That should always have a reservation, at the very least an open one!