kingit
on some deleted poem
13 Dec 2003, 12:12 AM
Was going fine til the pigeon in the arse bit!
So!- to be a woman?!!---nice sense of rhythm.
Hello my name is walter and i'am a sheisteeer,a demon, a pshyco,an recovering assasin,a detoxed pilot of god!
"Heeey walter"..we came to beleive...yep.fa la la la la la la la happy unholydays..our men we love them so. ju
You're Ming!- I know you're Ming.. the mighty!, the terrible!,..whatever.
Aheeemm..My brother sat me right down and he talked to me ,"about all this use me stuff" I sayd brother if y
you only knew if it feeeeels this good getting used..
you know the rest of this song...let me feeel why tough you are letting this s.o.b.use you up and how goood it feeels to you child...are you with me* 8.
I'am flatered by your most gratus comment...may i set the mood?I'll take of B.holliday" and put on "give it away now" by t.r.hot chili pepp's.I love your verse I will borrow a bit to put light on your voyerism you have my 'perssimon' to enter the realm any time.Dizzy from the icy smoke coated player's,diamond crotches,& gold plated card pay the rent..again.Manicured widowssucking on elated but almost dead "mates".Well dressed in sin he's mothers heart does beat within he's own.He will make more $$than bin ladin,publishing he's circumcision, and yes he's beloved Jocastas jealus son /scor. A tooth like decision.So untwist the noose and chag the messenger like h. kissinger under the misttletoe. your's get's a 10 I gott to run to south beach and get my claws manicured MEEEAAOOOW, for now.
"buying your wife another diamond ring." What the hell does she need another one for!? I know diamonds are a girl's best friend but she should be content already with the wedding ring.
good poem, 8
Ha ha ha... I hope you don't mean me? lol.
Boy, aint dat the truthe.
Really good.
Also, really really good. 10
Sounds like some tripe my demented mother would write, but what the fuck it's pretty good.
One of your better works.
good poem, i like it, 8
Nicely put...good use of the good book
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
14 Dec 2003, 8:23 PM
Thank gud it's all on toss-aways.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
14 Dec 2003, 8:25 PM
I once rhymed older with shoulder too.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
14 Dec 2003, 8:26 PM
How dare ye touch yeself.
I beat a person about the head with this printed-out text.