Lovely. 10

quite funny, a haiku is supposed to have more depth though preferably with natural imagery.

title: a dead man on being dead or confessions of a dead man.

Well at least he didn't bend you over for French poodle bred.

Probably not, only because you have no idea. Keep dreaming though, That's what keeps us alive.

Well, I liked it.

A little originality?

Louis La'mour? A map I would have saught. How ya been doin magus?

I finished it, and that's saying a lot. lol. The third stanza is the weakest, and ironically, that's what it's about. And since it's the crux that's where it should be the strongest.

I learned this one when i was five. Blessed with 9.

Kinda like my room, guitars and bed and all, not the cigarettes, or the supposed messed up head. I'm happy with myself actually. -7-

This is even worse than Mud's maudlin classic - 'It'll be lonely this Christmas, lonely and cold.'

The first verse reminds me of the band At the Drive-In, whose lyrics are notable for their ragged, stream of nonsence style.

I get it, the box is a dictionary. Good idea, needs more assembly though.

it at least passes the time. a good encapsulation of a universal emotion.

anal warts. 911

That's lesson 1. Second grades over there --->

"fuck the pimps in striphouses entrapping and stealing free souls desperate to profit on the exhibition of sexuality." This one's a bit off. I believe there's more here at work than what you've given us, but the rest are tight. Here's a 9.

Stick shift abortion.

Disgusting. Absolutely disgusting.