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Rebel Spirits (Free verse) by miraclemaker
fuck sensational television
Sadaam, Bush, go to Hell.
drown in an Iraqi oil well
fuck the madonna/whore complex
pervading the minds of those
unfortunate in their isolation
of any form of education.
fuck the world that murders
innocent or guilty homeless
handed a $5. bill to a living
freezing dead man standing
may he survive the night.
fuck the pimps in striphouses
entrapping and stealing free
souls desperate to profit on
the exhibition of sexuality.
fuck the Portland Police Department
intimidating the tokers into hiding
beating immigrants with broken English
arresting and carrying away peace
activists lighting their 3x5 flags.
fuck husbands who provoke wives
to fight for their goddess-given lives
to live in secret fear of his guns
to give excuses for their daughters and sons.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.8
Weighted score: 4.8569565
Overall Rank: 10478
Posted: December 15, 2003 9:51 AM PST; Last modified: December 15, 2003 9:51 AM PST
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entrapping and stealing free
souls desperate to profit on
the exhibition of sexuality." This one's a bit off.
I believe there's more here at work than what you've given us, but the rest are tight. Here's a 9.