The Thomas Brown Affair

by SupremeDreamer

Member since 2003 · Posted 16 Dec 2003 · Edited 16 Dec 2003 · 9 comments

A dead man walking doesn't need to talk much since his stench says it all

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[7] richa 16-Dec-03/6:25 AM Reply

quite funny, a haiku is supposed to have more depth though preferably with natural imagery.

[n/a] SupremeDreamer › richa 16-Dec-03/9:39 PM Reply

I know.. relax, progress is slow, the only other idea i had was to talk about his rotting corpse? and the test results just really stank. ;/

One day you shall have your pure & classic haiku, I just haven't come up with any good ideas for natural imagery. :[

plus, really now, a lot of the ideas I get are very very unoriginal, and never shall i go down that road willingly or unwillingly.

[7] richa 16-Dec-03/6:26 AM Reply

title: a dead man on being dead or confessions of a dead man.

[n/a] SupremeDreamer › richa 16-Dec-03/9:34 PM Reply

first one was the first topic idea I had..

And confessions? well, he doesn't really need to confess does he? Everyone can smell it. Thanks for helping though, its appreciated.

[8] sliver 16-Dec-03/6:45 AM Reply

Long Time Gone

[n/a] SupremeDreamer › sliver 16-Dec-03/9:32 PM Reply

sliver- I appreciate the suggestion, but that really doesn't suit the haiku unless its beef we're talkin bout, in which case it would be modified to: My Freezer Died - Cowberg Met Mr. Sunshine

[n/a] Everyone 16-Dec-03/11:11 AM Reply

Any of the following titles will be fine:

Flatulent Zombie III
Risen Dung
Astro-turd
The Brown Awakening
Soiled Ambulations
The Thomas Brown Affair

[n/a] SupremeDreamer › Everyone 16-Dec-03/9:18 PM Reply

flatulent zombie III? so whats I and II?

Risen dung? its a rotting corpse, not rotting crap.

Astro-turd? dead martians from mars? "man"!

The brown awakening.. hrmm.. not exactly what im looking for

Soiled Ambulations (damn, never came across that word when searching mr thesaurus!! but no)

The Thomas Brown Affair sounds fabulouse though. Thank you.

[10] horus8 16-Dec-03/9:43 PM Reply

lol