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The Thomas Brown Affair (Haiku) by SupremeDreamer A dead man walking
doesn't need to talk much since
his stench says it all
Up the ladder:
You Fell Asleep First
Down the ladder:
My Mountain (An ode to the nature poem)
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Posted: December 16, 2003 5:11 AM PST; Last modified: December 16, 2003 9:38 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.2622466 Overall Rank: 3993 Comments:
title: a dead man on being dead or confessions of a dead man.
first one was the first topic idea I had..
And confessions? well, he doesn't really need to confess does he? Everyone can smell it. Thanks for helping though, its appreciated.
Long Time Gone
sliver- I appreciate the suggestion, but that really doesn't suit the haiku unless its beef we're talkin bout, in which case it would be modified to: My Freezer Died - Cowberg Met Mr. Sunshine
Any of the following titles will be fine:
Flatulent Zombie III Risen Dung Astro-turd The Brown Awakening Soiled Ambulations The Thomas Brown Affair
flatulent zombie III? so whats I and II?
Risen dung? its a rotting corpse, not rotting crap. Astro-turd? dead martians from mars? "man"! The brown awakening.. hrmm.. not exactly what im looking for Soiled Ambulations (damn, never came across that word when searching mr thesaurus!! but no) The Thomas Brown Affair sounds fabulouse though. Thank you.
lol
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One day you shall have your pure & classic haiku, I just haven't come up with any good ideas for natural imagery. :[
plus, really now, a lot of the ideas I get are very very unoriginal, and never shall i go down that road willingly or unwillingly.