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The Thomas Brown Affair (Haiku) by SupremeDreamer

A dead man walking doesn't need to talk much since his stench says it all

SupremeDreamer 16-Dec-03/9:39 PM
I know.. relax, progress is slow, the only other idea i had was to talk about his rotting corpse? and the test results just really stank. ;/

One day you shall have your pure & classic haiku, I just haven't come up with any good ideas for natural imagery. :[

plus, really now, a lot of the ideas I get are very very unoriginal, and never shall i go down that road willingly or unwillingly.




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