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high school tragedy number six

Member since 2003 · Posted 15 Dec 2003 · 3 comments

an infatuation, fact or fiction? whose jurisdiction rules this carcass? car crash, crimson carpet compass. i dont want this. you can have it. on my front lawn blood spilled fondly in that winter dawn last march. she spent her last breath telling me to never drink or fall asleep. car crash, constant waves of worry. i dont want this. you can have it.

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[n/a] Nicholas Jones 15-Dec-03/9:49 AM Reply
The first verse reminds me of the band At the Drive-In, whose lyrics are notable for their ragged, stream of nonsence style.
[9] Jeremi B. Handrinos 15-Dec-03/12:35 PM Reply
Stick shift abortion.
[8] richa 16-Dec-03/6:50 AM Reply
kill crimson