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A Runner's Fistful of Haiku (Haiku) by HaikuMofo
--- On a Runner's High, auto-asphyxiated by controlled breathing. My muscles would scream, all but for their lack of air, mute to the beating. The pain in my chest, it will be less tomorrow, when I run again. ---

Up the ladder: Old Man
Down the ladder: Prayer of Forgiveness

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Weighted score: 5.4482355
Overall Rank: 2948
Posted: October 25, 2004 1:00 PM PDT; Last modified: October 25, 2004 1:00 PM PDT
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[8] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.100.68 | 26-Oct-04/10:30 AM | Reply
a mugged runner?
[10] razorgrin @ 192.207.76.85 | 26-Oct-04/11:57 AM | Reply
I am out of shape. Lack of groceries has suppressed my masochism. Somewhat.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.154.19.210 > razorgrin | 26-Oct-04/12:03 PM | Reply
You must be on Ramamamadan, then. Don't bother. Muslim women don't have souls. That's definitely, definitely true.
[10] razorgrin @ 192.207.76.85 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 27-Oct-04/11:28 AM | Reply
I do too have a soul! I keep it in a secret hidden thimble.
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