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A Runner's Fistful of Haiku (Haiku) by HaikuMofo
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On a Runner's High,
auto-asphyxiated
by controlled breathing.
My muscles would scream,
all but for their lack of air,
mute to the beating.
The pain in my chest,
it will be less tomorrow,
when I run again.
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Posted: October 25, 2004 1:00 PM PDT; Last modified: October 25, 2004 1:00 PM PDT
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