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Eat (Free verse) by somemorepoetry
Climb the stairs
Bound down the hall
Gentle waves of music
Pulsing and moving the air
Dancing thickly on my breath
Trusting my feet to
Bend as it sweeps between my toes
Pausing on the tip of my lips
Praying to tell what it tells me
Placing itself between my ears
Darling, eat this plum
The fog rests like a lion
On my lawn, waiting
To move when I, prey,
Step out the door
Breakfast comes but once
While we are young
Eat quickly
The music is done
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.5
Weighted score: 5.6723537
Overall Rank: 2035
Posted: December 14, 2003 12:40 PM PST; Last modified: December 14, 2003 12:40 PM PST
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