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Electricity (Free verse) by darkshark Remind me
When I reach the end to
Close the book and
Turn off the light
The electricity flows too much
When I leave the lamp on
Every now and then the floor creaks
I think it's your foot stepping
Closer to my bed
Only if I leave the electricity flowing
Do I realize you are not there
Up the ladder:
Goa
Down the ladder:
talkstupid
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Posted: December 14, 2003 12:31 PM PST; Last modified: December 14, 2003 12:31 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.1490035 Overall Rank: 5329 Comments:
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<{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.116.54
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14-Dec-03/5:35 PM
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One of your better works.
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