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Electricity (Free verse) by darkshark

Remind me When I reach the end to Close the book and Turn off the light The electricity flows too much When I leave the lamp on Every now and then the floor creaks I think it's your foot stepping Closer to my bed Only if I leave the electricity flowing Do I realize you are not there

<{Baba^Yaga}> 14-Dec-03/5:35 PM
One of your better works.




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