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<{Baba^Yaga}> on diamond of love by crwncka1 12 Dec 2003, 1:43 AM
You should put that on the special skills section of your resume. You'd freak'em out in management.
?-Dave_Mysterious-? on some deleted poem 11 Dec 2003, 5:13 PM
I've never heard of a selection of paths as a metaphore for choosing Jesus before. How do you manage to be so creative?
?-Dave_Mysterious-? on Let Go by PunkyPanda 11 Dec 2003, 5:15 PM
You need a fuckin' heater, man.
?-Dave_Mysterious-? on some deleted poem 11 Dec 2003, 5:16 PM
This is just a copy of Xeno's paradox.
Shuushin on some deleted poem 12 Dec 2003, 7:48 AM
It has a fairy tale feel to it with this kindof two choices; black/white, good/evil simplicity (would that it were so!). This standing at the edge of an abyss (equipped with two bridges, apparently) is a classic existentialist image - interesting considering the context ("I stare into the abyss and it stares back"; a feeling of dread at the realization of nothingness)
Shuushin on Without you by Luv2write 12 Dec 2003, 8:20 AM
I dunno. could do without a few of the cliches and stock images. I actually thought maybe it was satire toward the middle there, started hoping for a twist ending. Must be getting jaded in my old age.
Shuushin on The man of steel by <{Baba^Yaga}> 12 Dec 2003, 9:01 AM
A nice quick and jaunty one-off. Probably built itself - maybe could use some reformatting/restructuring now that you know what it's about. entertaining in any case.
==Doylum on EGG by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 12 Dec 2003, 9:09 AM
surely one egg would have been un oeuf!!!!111 quack quack quack quack
==Doylum on What I really needed by Shardik 12 Dec 2003, 9:13 AM
have you got writters bloke? you haven't written a poem for at least 2 minutes!!!
==Doylum on What I really needed by Shardik 12 Dec 2003, 9:15 AM
block even
==Doylum on some deleted poem 12 Dec 2003, 9:24 AM
whats this about?
PunkyPanda on Let Go by PunkyPanda 12 Dec 2003, 10:08 AM
Lol...I wrote this one about a guy I was dating who lived in Chicago (I live in AZ duh) so I just woke up one night and wrote it, these things come to me in my sleep...strangest thing :)
PunkyPanda on Hurt by PunkyPanda 12 Dec 2003, 10:11 AM
No No No... They hate me because I hurt them, and since the thought of my exsistance makes them sick to their stomaches...I'm willing to die to leave them happy knowing I'm no longer living. Basically, I care about them so much and I want them to be happy, I'll die for them.
Caducus on The man of steel by <{Baba^Yaga}> 12 Dec 2003, 1:51 PM
sour kraut yolk - ewww
Caducus on Lessons on being a man by thepinkbunnyofdoom 12 Dec 2003, 1:53 PM
ahh yes my wise rabbit !
Caducus on some deleted poem 12 Dec 2003, 1:54 PM
Line 9 - loved it Infact i'll even stay behind and clap the damn orchestra --8
Caducus on some deleted poem 12 Dec 2003, 1:55 PM
don't care what this is about it hit something shallow and landed on deep.
horus8 on Lessons on being a man by thepinkbunnyofdoom 12 Dec 2003, 1:55 PM
"hospital" typo early on.
Caducus on What I really needed by Shardik 12 Dec 2003, 1:58 PM
I think i know what your're wrting of here. Dad? You don't have to conceal to reveal - however i love this for its fragility and pride. I'm moved 10
horus8 on some deleted poem 12 Dec 2003, 2:00 PM
Ha Ha, ha, always...,...