little_big_nose
on Justifications by Evening
2 Jan 2004, 5:33 PM
This is GREAT! I can totally relate to it, keep up yhe good work
It's pretty good, I don't understand it, which is proubly what you're going for, so good job
I don't really like this one, I dunno why, and I wish I did so maybe it's help you, but I'm not that great, so don't listen to what I think
This is pretty good, and I enjoied reading it. I hope you find the answers you are looking for
This was fun to read and I really liked it
I liked this one too. It's also whimsical, like deadweight, but less gothic.
I really am a sucker for whimsy. check out my pome Taller Girl, it has a spinning girl in it too. Assuming your spinner is a girl. Woman. Female. Person. You know.
NICE! I think god sucks ass, so I see me and you are on the same page, please read my poem "where was god" and give me your thoughts
I give it a 7... i think it is an ok poem. But the only thing that turns me down is the whole God thing... but thats only me. Still, pretty well written...
He was HANGING ON THE CROSS bleeding his guts out so that...so that, um, SO HIS FATHER COULD LET YOU INTO HEAVEN instead of having to send you to ETERNAL DAMNATION, you ungrateful clod. Don't be deceived by letting SATAN MAKE YOU THINK THERE's SO MUCH EMPHASIS on this physical plane. God is concerned with our SOULS not with our PHYSICAL BODIES. Sometimes what he IS FORCED TO DO TO COMBAT SATAN and save our ETERNAL SOULS is hard for us to understand with our emphasis on EARTHLY CONCERNS. Since your cousin OD'd she's DEFINITELY GOING TO HELL, but maybe if she'd lived 10 years longer she would have had two little babies and DECEIVED THEM INTO HELL TOO!!!!! So God had to take her now to SAVE THE BABIES FROM HELL!!!! Who are YOU to QUESTION GOD?
some conjuringing? a curse? Have a snowman; eat his nose.
remember me, im the dude who wrote 'where was god', well it's my quite firm belife that There is no god to question, he doesn't exist...i bet you would love to know that i work at a Planned Parenthood office, If you liked that one, read this
New commandments
Your extinct god
Will bow down before me and call himself a fraud
And tell your poor abused children that I will end the animosity
I will be the one to set them free
The new ten commandments go as follows
He who prays, also wallows
Tho shalt not commit a crime
To buy your extinct god time
Tho shall destroy all idols
Tho shall burn every bible
Tho shall dine in thy own mercy
As soon as they can kill me
Tho shall sin in my name
And tho shall treat life as a game
Tho shalt not rape thy mother
Tho shalt not love thy brother
For the final preparation
To assure the restoration
Tho shall sing for satan
To give back all you have taken
whoa I really like this one, good work!
*mwah* christmas poetry at its best :D
:)
You must be crazy!
*groans* The whole world doesn't treat the holiday with disgrace because the whole world does not celebrate Christmas. I think this comes across as a little too preachy. Your message of people needing to acknowledge the holiday's true meaning is important enough to write about. Still, I think it could be done in a better way.
This reads like a bad hallmark card.
If you can be so hooked on coffee. Never try DRUGS?
I like this poem. Wright poems just how you feel
dont take note of these first grade English dicks
who tell you every things wrong.......
Finally, someone who feels my pain