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Dizzy (Free verse) by phbiscuit
Make yourself spin around
Until you are dizzy
And the stars wheel overhead
And watch them burn the tree
As your heart thumps
Like a wardrum
While they huddle around the fire
Laghing about silly things
Rubbing their gloved hands together
They'll spin and spin
While your eyes are unable to focus on
Any single one of them
And that's when your heart
Will really begin to race
When you realize there is not
A single one that cares to ask
Why your eyes are jumping
I, on the other hand, will watch calmly
My heart thumps as any heart should thump
With a smooth and steady rhythm no matter the circumstance
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7991
Posted: January 2, 2004 4:57 PM PST; Last modified: January 2, 2004 4:57 PM PST
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I really am a sucker for whimsy. check out my pome Taller Girl, it has a spinning girl in it too. Assuming your spinner is a girl. Woman. Female. Person. You know.