wow

Whatcha on? share?

nice. now it all comes clear. alles ist klar.

Yes, It's always worth it. Been awhile since I've been here, how ya doin?

Sounds like you need a band-aid or 3

For a minute - I was in my own cab. good un.

That would work. yep, yes it would.

I'd like to see a different word than warriors - but the piece in its entirety, it is quite poignant nonetheless.

I wrote this my freshman year of college and ran across it tonight. Since I'm 1/2 drunk and don't much feel like writing, I decided to post it. Please have mercy, as it is what it is. ;o)

"The rain storms" delete "rain"; not too shabby. Stays I think to the right side of pimple - but only barely. What else u got? Fire it up.

-8- Because introspection is so very overrated.

Not enough cursing to really be a pimple....

I'm not really seeing anything "shamelessly lewd" here, but it's pretty good.

Zodiac, thanks for the comments. I wrote this a while ago while Dave and I were doing really well and I missed him vey much. Since then...well, everything has changed. Might need to write a new poem to explain it all. Anyway, thanks for the thoughts and believe me Ive thought it over a bunch.

Confucious says:

TEEN? That's been a fanta------- O.K. I actually like this, I guess 28 years hasn't been enough growing up for me. But expand n these feelings, It says what you mean, now just find more ways to say it. By the way, how old is your friend Sasha? I'm not afraid to travel!

Good words,Give it a few years, you might find a good man and a real talent for writing.

Oh yes, I'm sure you'll go far. Don't drop the glasses.

sorry Silver-I accidentally erased your comment-( meant to reply questioning it-you can put it back up if you would like!

What, no death? Boo.