Brilliant so true 10

i cannot imagine anything worse. should easily make the list. that is what you were going for, wasn't it? here is some help. -1-

best poem i ever read -0-

--> "unchanged his expression" can u do something with that?

liking the title.

did you mean "hart" is in a male [red] deer? quite nice, though maybe a few too many "is"s and "was"s

Ahhh, tequila...that which makes me feel like hell. Very nice.

You need to write something really crappy so I can stop giving you nines and tens (it's getting rather old).

Now now it wasn't nice of you to delete my comment like that. I mean, I'd just re-post it, but I can't because I don't remember: partly beccause your poem had a mental black-out effect similar to the pressure of a steel baseball bat when applied to the skull of a living person. O well.

I read the first line. Then vomited upon and ate my own penis with a draught of dark warm ale.

This has holes that I can't seem to get across. sorry.

Congratulations. You went for poetry, and got humor. I went for humor, and wound up glancing off an udder into the far reaches of the galaxy. Cows happen.

Why you little..... Making me scroll all the way down here just to read the comments! No you do not get on the worst list with this!!!

so disappointing but true...Beautifully written...~10~

I like the way you think

i cant read this i just cant

what happens next???? suspense is fun

love it good work!

A very mooving poem Out of all the trash on PR this is true feeling pome.good work

mmmm, prob start looking for someone else... ei , just my opinion :P