| Re: a comment on The Other Side Of Never by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
18-May-04/8:57 PM |
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| Re: a comment on she. by opiate |
17-May-04/2:06 PM |
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Where'd Tinuviel come from then?
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| Re: Oomphless by shwenatjadeflower |
16-May-04/7:04 PM |
Nono
Drop all of the last line except the first and last word. Then capitalize the last word
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| Re: a comment on Tripping Through A Paper Square by Shardik |
16-May-04/3:28 PM |
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| Re: a comment on and the world evolves by peaceseeker |
16-May-04/12:18 PM |
A few commas couldn't hurt.
"You are what you make of me".....who'd you learn that from?
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| Re: One More Mile by marvelis |
16-May-04/12:12 PM |
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Clichééééééééééééééééééééééé!
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| Re: 42 by brazen |
16-May-04/12:11 PM |
HITCHHIKER'S GUIDE
Just because it's a good book.
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| Re: and the world evolves by peaceseeker |
16-May-04/11:59 AM |
"live and love inside my universe" sounds like an anglophone Catullus on a bad day.
The whole thing seems a quasi-religious litany to some weird semi-deified entity known as "you." However "you" is most certainly not human because "you" is unable to air "your"m pain in reality. Then again "you" is also not omnipotent because "you" is not the one in whose universe the "living and loving" is done.
Please explain who this mysterious "you" is.
Thank you
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| Re: tribute by francis nor capule |
16-May-04/7:52 AM |
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Read the masters. Learn about them so that you can forget later.
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| Re: she. by opiate |
15-May-04/6:37 PM |
TOLKEIN IS DEAD. Unless you are Tolkein frozen cryogenically within minutes of death and then subsequently revived, which you are plainly not, please refrain from appropriating images, motifs and names (tinuviel) from The Lord of The Rings. Otherwise go to one of the multitudinous fanfic sites where you can write about gimli assraping an elf.
Thank you
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| Re: me. by opiate |
15-May-04/6:34 PM |
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Is this a nightmare or a bad LSD trip? Then again, I remember the time I was caught in a spiderweb in the heart of the desert in a hollow tree trunk. I was in Las Vegas and they gave me some sort of weird concoction to drink and when I woke up I was out in the Nevada desert. Sound familiar?
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| Re: a comment on The Unseen by cuddlytiger17 |
15-May-04/6:13 PM |
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Pity- the same sort of pity I felt when first reading your poetry- only more so.
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| Re: The Unseen by cuddlytiger17 |
15-May-04/4:57 PM |
This is quite sick.
I'm sorry you have to deal with this.
And zodiac, those pictures were absolutely disgusting, did you really have to?
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| Re: a comment on A Year Later (edited a bit) by Sasha |
15-May-04/3:32 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Tripping Through A Paper Square by Shardik |
15-May-04/3:30 PM |
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| Re: Tripping Through A Paper Square by Shardik |
15-May-04/3:05 PM |
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| Re: Not Real by DeadtotheWorld |
15-May-04/12:51 PM |
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| Re: Ash Wednesday by Dreamer |
15-May-04/12:50 PM |
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| Re: An art undone by Bobjim |
15-May-04/12:10 PM |
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| Re: Skating by Bobjim |
15-May-04/11:16 AM |
Talk about vote inflation.
Half the voters are the same person.
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