Re: Where? by trisha	5-Jan-03/6:47 PM
even hairlips can be surgically removed. have a 7.
Re: Render. Defunct by Owner of the Sky	5-Jan-03/2:04 PM
soup-con.
Re: The Dance (Part II) by purplestain	5-Jan-03/2:01 PM
very pleasant. a good change of pace from the elitist trust fund trash poemranker attracts. have a 9.
Re: I remenber by little_angel_maria	3-Jan-03/11:55 PM
ha ha EWhojoyhhyggifv. the an epilepsy attack holy shit, to fucking funny, i'll remenber this...10! this is the best worst written poem of all... YOU GET THE BIRD LEGGED HUT OF CONSTANT EMOTIONAL EMOTION WITH NO MOTION" AWARD IN AHHHH not swallowing your tongue? sure why not. 10!
Re: a comment on Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger	3-Jan-03/8:05 AM
well he made you say scarlet bubbles and shake your fist at the sky and so no lord, not the scarlet bubbles, and that my friend is a funny site, and deserves merit. and a heavy metal pimple poem would not include christmas, ever. because megadeath broke up last year, so... there. also i have a soft spot for socrates because he had an imp.
Re: a comment on Just clubbing fur seals by <{Baba^Yaga}>	3-Jan-03/7:55 AM
that bastard. he new i'd do this..his laughter..haunting me!!!!!!!!!!!! no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what time is it? noooooooooo! i have to go to some mervyns ausitin in two hours, and then go see bill my photographic conquistador..snap the picture, take it off hey!, snap the picture it's cold as hell hey! take the shot before i eat your custom light hey! my brain hurts, and i love it hey! hey! hey! picayunes aye? sounds delightful..one of repeating villanelle in raymond burrs work, or the sound of his wheelchair approaching the crime scene...why did he call his a villanelle?
Re: a comment on Wanking by Bobjim	3-Jan-03/6:43 AM
This comment/sentence alone was worth the booger chewing boredom of skimming your poem, but i did notice a few errors, "OWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!" should be kerplochie,"actuly" should be a retrospective complete with sound effects, and three inch floopy should be more reserved, say two? and we did kiddie porn last month, which makes you kitsch, or some other euro trash word that constitutes dumpster diving.
Re: a comment on The Fire Burns Bright (an Ode to Kaolin) by <~>	3-Jan-03/5:50 AM
Also, i'm aloud to be nice for special occasions.+
Re: a comment on The Fire Burns Bright (an Ode to Kaolin) by <~>	3-Jan-03/5:00 AM
new year. new attitude.batteries? shit. try methynoldioxamphetimine, but enima'd...i could run, on goat pellets currently, and it's not a new me...we have our difference, granted, i may not have the most prolific vocabulary, or a piece of paper stating my peer acknowledged credentials, but i know when is when, and also, i claim partial responsibility for this gibbering newbie prancing around like she knows what in the fuck is going on here, or who's who..outrageous..i was literally physically sick last night by her psycic attack on z..and, i, unlike most, am loyal and true to friends..just some times so over the top i have to come back and call it a lie, i mean prostitution, drugs, booze, promiscuity..i'm a fucking walking one act..it's killing me, but it's horribly embarrasing..i gotta get it out, man...i'm sick of hurting people, but at the same time i'm glad i'm damn skilled at it also because i am a calculating and deadly powerful opponent mostly physically, ("i want charles in charge of me", sorry t,v's on)but my mother gave me a verbal gift with a curse to accompany..it's when i don't fucking talk that people who really know me, get scarce..it's a fucking nightmare man..like dr. bruce from the hulk..i just harness every drop of inverted monumental memory pain, load it in my weapon of choice, and go to work..i don't get tired, i don't care, i don't feel...then something happens a reverse vacuum occurs like the green mile, and it's over, gone, only one thing remains.the story of how some crazy kid did the impossible..people aren't physical anymore P, times have changed, it's like highlander now..you can see a monster in the crowd every once in a while, these days, make eye contact, share a knowing smile, move on. the internet and culture and familys have changed..people don't even read books anymore. take tanya for example i wont even mention what her four whole booked collection is, because it's irrelivant. i on the other hand am the last generation of book collecting D&d nerds..i walked america fucking at least five or six times trading books out of my sea bag for replacements, and learning construction trades from older cats to survive,..books came first, clothes and hygine items next (i smelled bad alot)..times have gone completely dark age since that ala akbar thing, but it was well on it's way before that, but now, people are sneaky and not equipped to deal face to face, they'll read your mail, steal your identity, step on your chickens, burn your fucking house down, bone your bestfriend, steal you sperm, than introduce you as the love of their lives at a party, especially if your farther up the food chain, remoras in a sense, parasites..weakening the father land (just kidding, but not really) i've seen it all, but her gen. is the worst, totally illiterate, the starbucks wassup posse, white kids who think they're black, and hip, blacks that sing country(better granted) and virgin poodles who behave like whore pit bulls.. running around in a writing forum going i'm a college grad, i've studied business, look out, where'd you go to sckool? watch me write. i mean with me..i atleast put it out there with my site, my art, my life, all free to be used against me...and fuck is it ever, but what she did with z? the tone man..i could hear it through the keys...it was exactly the thing i've come to expect from these desperately seeking a bruising types... i can't believe i would come out and say it, but..shit out of all the writing forums, to pick this one, to choose that username, and remember i was the first person that got into it with her, and i could feel something wrong, sub consciously, she was on a mission, but i never imagined... what she said about me and z, made you and my tiffs seem tame and they weren't, they were ugly...so i guess i feel a bit like mary shelley on this one, and i'm sorry. but no way could i stand there idle on that one..i may have flaws, but i will die swinging at the fences like jesse james.besides, i'm bored and sick of hurting my hands dealing with those who come to fight dragons with framed business administration diplomas and google. that's just fucking where i draw a line, a bead, and i big scorching doobie..shoobie doobie doo, what were we talking about again? ah yeah..batteries, try cadmium..they last longer and are environmentally not as bad as drunk oil freighter captains..good night. sorry for the rant, my head is thoroughly throbbing now.e
Re: Caged by TxMstng02	3-Jan-03/3:43 AM
once at the zoo last year the orangutan covered himself with a blanket, and wouldn't let no one see him, all day every day for like a month..it was funny stuff i tell you..quiet and eerie, than they brought in a specialist who said he needed a mate, now they are both under the blanket. wating for everyone to go home...true, but back to poetry.this is a...struggling peace, salmon like to swim upstream to feel the resistance, and earn the pussy...but if you turn one down stream he'll just find a pool to die in..also true. so GET OUT OF THE PULL, AND SWIM SWIM! that was a metaphor aimed at helping you write better poetry, do not try to do a jack ass stunt, and pool hop nude with a salmon tied to your guppie.that would be mobile poetry, and possibly land you in jail. e
Re: www.people.freenet.de/freeek/SajjadAli.swf by darby pyn	3-Jan-03/3:21 AM
would you belive, i commented on this without going there earlier. i just went. HAAAAAAAAAA.SHIT FUCK SHIT, YOU ARE FUCKING WILD HA HA HA. that was totally fucking freaky shit..ha ha ha wow. shit jesus..i was like sitting here with insomnia, wondring how i'll feel with no sleep in twoi days at my mervyns audition tomorrow, and i was like well lets see what darbys been up to, and than i checked out the site, and spilled beer all over my face and lap, and my hearts going a hundred fucking miles an hour..uncool..really fucking uncool. have a ten.??
Re: The dance by purplestain	3-Jan-03/1:29 AM
yes, i remember..this just popped up in front of me, suprised the hell out of me, is this you ang?
Re: unsent by Bill Z Bub	2-Jan-03/11:20 PM
"cold from the wheel, and warm them with my own heat." love the word play right here.way to feel the down stroke. here's what i think about this poem getting a 0. 10! booyah! fuck them tonguein clit is the all time best hangover cure, besides fruity pebbles of course.
Re: IRONSHOE by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	2-Jan-03/10:52 PM
D.a. i just went and learned how to write one of these, and i'm just going to come 'out' and say..your structure tweek is unfucking believable..i all of a sudden got it '-' cuz at first i was a bit mislead, by actually the power of your choosen 'hand picked' symbols and layers, and you 'know' your subject matter and combining powers, but i am sitting here right now convinced at this moment, that regardless, of our silent but bursting avoidance of one another..he he. you are an incredibly talented 'gifted' (excuse the term), scribbler..unreal, just fucking to much..this is a masterpiece..if you are indeed younger than me...you are the smartest most innovative creature i've ever had the privelage, of never meeting. there is no swagger award or cue tip, good enough for this..un-fucking real...you're almost too smart for your own good. we are doomed..i am just simply amazed by this..this is a magical poem. not safe, funny, yet serious, aimed at more than one thing and person. i'm sorry i ever doubted you. You, are thee best writer, hands down at poemranker..it's all there..every word absolute and perfect, style self made and possesd with a piece of some element i've never seen..you could very possibly be the philosopher's stone..if you're a nineteen year old college student, i am on drugs. well... i am, but you know what i'm saying
Re: Mind of War by t_t_redhot	2-Jan-03/10:30 PM
you have a maggot on your lip, go like this [i make a motion at wiping my mouth, you wipe but miss yours] almost.k
Re: survival of the weakest by brazen	2-Jan-03/10:23 PM
between you, and me? to see just how fucking expensive movie candy can get.
Re: love 2 by little_angel_maria	2-Jan-03/10:20 PM
http://www.hermes-school.ch/ghezzi/index.html why oh lord, wont the autodidacts let me join..i too, have a deep connection with hermes, but nay, nay..they just mock me...and call me powder shorts and red tits. bastards. beautifull sculptors and paintings though..where do i sign up?
Re: a comment on The Fire Burns Bright (an Ode to Kaolin) by <~>	2-Jan-03/10:02 PM
tis you, mang. and don't wash those thermals. ebay is awaiting for you, too. it was the least i could do. i believe that poets are a dying breed and should come together and think tank instead of stripping eachother to shreds before the real war. the one against the media and leprichauns...i mean the little green men from moo,, ah fuck it..the war against crop spraying and bird caging, the secret wars. i am your friend, and also..i know the difference between a clean hit and a sucker punch. you deserve neither, just some respect at what your good at..and that's poetry. cheers to you darling, and yours. luv, the starving toothless siberian witch. ms.yaga.
Re: IRONSHOE by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	2-Jan-03/9:52 PM
how dare you fish slap Bachus with perry mason's missing hoof. scoundrel...yes, you consistently amaze me. even through my drug hazes and tantrums, but i can't help but wonder, do you think that if you prayed tonight (right now) to jesu to allow you to shit a turd out tomorrow morning shaped like a small child equipped with a small donkies head holding a corn kernal shaped like a foot fucking our mother's ass in his hand..me and you can some how break into heaven and steal the 'inflamed shoe horn of all fittingness'. jesus i hope so, cuz it's getting dark, and i'm pretty fucking cold and hungry, so could you just push harder...we're running out of time..and you know what happens at midnight...squash sex, again. HURRAY!
Re: The Fire Burns Bright (an Ode to Kaolin) by <~>	2-Jan-03/9:39 PM
S7. L3, W1, typo kiddo yes indeed. thank you, both for 'getting' me, and letting me 'get' myself. i honestly, consider this place my second home, and kaolin, i'm grateful to you and jealous..thank you both. and congradulations, if you guys are ever in my forest, ever! don't be strangers, let me be your host, for once(i'm also convinced there's a movie here, in the making) if we could only find d.a.bastard eloped with settle, again, while me and babbit were out hunting for elk and beaver, love is tough on the sole.??