Re: Ode to poetandknowit by Bobjim the II |
30-Dec-02/2:15 PM |
goats should be goaties.
"they kill for food"
"that's what keeps them going"
dawn of the dead-1982. goerge romero.
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Re: Ode to -=Dick_Angle=- by Bobjim the II |
30-Dec-02/12:48 PM |
this takes 'worst' to new 'fathoms'
that's why i have to give it a ten. see, it's like this bob jim. you have to get jumped in to join the bad boy on boy club. you can't circumnavigate the pecking order now..who's -=Dick_Angle=- ? ha ha HAAAAA HA HA! you are asking for trouble i don't think your ass can cash? nevermind.u
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Re: a haiku for all you traditionalists, and after you're done reading it you can eat my shorts by bondjedi |
29-Dec-02/12:16 PM |
you rebel, you. i have an asian detector built in shimmy rod, but allas my fuse has fizzled again. looks like you are on your own.
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Re: I have reinvented the haiku and made it my own, becoming the world's first haiku gangsta in the process so you all had better just get it over with and give this 'ku a big fat TEN? by bondjedi |
29-Dec-02/12:14 PM |
the best thing about this? the word 'ku. that is all. carry on
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Re: Gone by Katie2 |
28-Dec-02/5:21 PM |
yodeling in the valley. a delicious break from potatos.$
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Re: a comment on Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8 |
28-Dec-02/5:14 PM |
thanks..re-edits work better months later..check out 30seconds to mars website..jared letos band, has nothing to do with this poem. i just wanted to share my confusion at current pop bullshit with someone else...if you can figure it all out let me know? life is strange, and i am at a loss to say what's worthwhile intelectualy speaking these days..i fucking give up. i quit. i live in a world of show and tell, and my item is pretentious apocalyptic poetry. can i borrow a role of toilet paper? this is going to take a while. lol..
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Re: a comment on The Coming Light by poetandknowit |
28-Dec-02/11:06 AM |
three baba, bachus, horus...patti is gw, but she's to cool to have others trust me, she's anti that shit, and shaw is old man, and that's it. where do you get a 100. at the website you can hear all three of us distinctively.horus, old man, and god's wife. the rest is other peoples bandwagoning.
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Re: a comment on The Coming Light by poetandknowit |
28-Dec-02/11:03 AM |
shawn is this a slip up?..are you ornella and were you fucking with me for four hours the other night?! cuz that would seriously be uncool bros.
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Re: a comment on The Coming Light by poetandknowit |
28-Dec-02/11:00 AM |
that's what i've been saying dude. ornella is athena! that's why she came after me for coming clean about her disfigured habits.
that's what i've been saying pk, it's too coincidental.think about it..she appeared right at that same time we were discussing her, but i swear on my son..i am not old man, and he is not athena and neither am i or god's wife...ornella is athena or lonedisco29 and a1/2.
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Re: a comment on The Coming Light by poetandknowit |
28-Dec-02/10:55 AM |
WE PLAY MUSIC TOGETHER NO ONE ASSUMES ANY THING ABOUT THE OTHER god or un god. and neither of us have mullets, but we will put you in a barber chair and teach your clit to whistle the canadian anthem.
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Re: a comment on The Coming Light by poetandknowit |
28-Dec-02/10:48 AM |
old man river is not athena..athena is this nasty looking chick who thinks she's a dutch popstar in venice beach..river is shawn, my friend from new england/guitarist and songwriter friend of mine in THE CADS.
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Re: a comment on The Coming Light by poetandknowit |
28-Dec-02/10:45 AM |
shawn. he is a professor? have you been snorting your breakfast again? whatever you do don't see the two towers.
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Re: a comment on The Coming Light by poetandknowit |
28-Dec-02/10:41 AM |
don't feel bad. at least you don't have to perform with him..he doesn't even wear shoes, and he smokes your pot when your not looking.
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Re: a comment on Little Johnie's Jihad by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
28-Dec-02/10:32 AM |
that depends on whether it's being played acoustic in taos, or full electric on sunset blvd. i think they would enjoy the bush sound bytes we included in the song...and the electricution of my friend in the end..did you listen to the song? because the lyrics are a mere fraction of the experience that is mr. johnies jihad. how can you resist bush and the crawford coffee shop?
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Re: Pure by angel_uy |
27-Dec-02/7:43 PM |
a container of pringles i can't eat in one sit down? [the missing part of the last sentence]
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Re: im playing basketball by rockinindividual |
27-Dec-02/7:33 PM |
this would be more exciting if you changed basketball, to curling
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Re: a comment on Little Johnie's Jihad by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
27-Dec-02/11:51 AM |
that's awesome. we watched monty python here too, then the montery rock festival on dvd. jimi's performance was 'out of control'. great minds think alike. Glad you guys are out of that drought now. cheers.
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Re: Things by Quarton |
26-Dec-02/12:49 PM |
this was a great read. loved it two things.....typo early on become HAS TO BE FIXED, and i would love it more if machines was singular instead at the end...machine. that would be 'heavy'. i'll wait to vote.
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Re: a comment on Brackish by <~> |
26-Dec-02/12:26 PM |
that feeling never goes away. sometimes i feel as though i'm being pulled in all directions by different parts of my body, and certain people, and moods..all very normal and healthy natural reactions this time of the year. in fact all year. it's all just a constant test between you, yourself, and the environment you've filled with stuff and people and 'reasons'. What goes down is sure to rise taller and quicker. at least you have talent and skills with a relentless curiosity. your attitude can't be stopped it's more consistent than the phantoms yawn. you'll be fine.
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Re: Brackish by <~> |
26-Dec-02/12:04 PM |
But, for now
i turn back.
Because, we know you're there (home) from the begining...and i'm really prejudice lately against the turning towards home at the end of a poem...i love you regardless though, and believe in your writing with or with out. It's just my insecurities breathing down my mullet.
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