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Render. Defunct

by Owner of the Sky

Member since 2002 · Posted 5 Jan 2003 · 3 comments

Oh you, my Philosopher's lovechild, Caustic and bitter Tyro; Vehemently, In voluntary (Virulently) You inject my, infect my, bust my chops. You once said... The chemicals are I am the worm inside. I can spray you, squish you, (under the giant boot of moot) Or feed you to the birds. But no, I will swallow you *Glug* With my tequila. Integrity, in (the) gritty in tact we lie Because you said-- just in case I should expire, now or later, I love you And Just in case you do, I love you.

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[9] <{Baba^Yaga}> 5-Jan-03/2:04 PM Reply
soup-con.
[n/a] Owner of the Sky › <{Baba^Yaga}> 6-Jan-03/2:15 AM Reply
Huh?
[5] Caducus 15-Jan-03/4:57 AM Reply
boring compared to the other 2 i just commented on, but then i again i dont really get it. -5-