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Render. Defunct (Free verse) by Owner of the Sky
Oh you, my Philosopher's lovechild, Caustic and bitter Tyro; Vehemently, In voluntary (Virulently) You inject my, infect my, bust my chops. You once said... The chemicals are I am the worm inside. I can spray you, squish you, (under the giant boot of moot) Or feed you to the birds. But no, I will swallow you *Glug* With my tequila. Integrity, in (the) gritty in tact we lie Because you said-- just in case I should expire, now or later, I love you And Just in case you do, I love you.

Up the ladder: A Stressful Moment
Down the ladder: spark

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7723
Posted: January 5, 2003 12:02 PM PST; Last modified: January 5, 2003 12:02 PM PST
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[9] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 5-Jan-03/2:04 PM | Reply
soup-con.
[n/a] Owner of the Sky @ 61.9.0.98 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 6-Jan-03/2:15 AM | Reply
Huh?
[5] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 15-Jan-03/4:57 AM | Reply
boring compared to the other 2 i just commented on, but then i again i dont really get it. -5-
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