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spark (Haiku) by NinjaPoet Typewriter is cold
like a damp summer morning.
Where are my gloves at?
Up the ladder:
Render. Defunct
Down the ladder:
An American Valentine
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
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Posted: January 29, 2003 9:36 PM PST; Last modified: January 29, 2003 9:36 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7727 Comments:
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Robert K Foster @ 209.68.66.6
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23-May-03/10:41 AM
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ending in "at" adds an urban/hilbilly feel to this that ia am guessing you didn't intend. perhaps another adjective such as "warm" or "wool" or somehting...before the word "gloves"
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