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spark (Haiku) by NinjaPoet

Typewriter is cold like a damp summer morning. Where are my gloves at?

Robert K Foster 23-May-03/10:41 AM
ending in "at" adds an urban/hilbilly feel to this that ia am guessing you didn't intend. perhaps another adjective such as "warm" or "wool" or somehting...before the word "gloves"




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