on Tomorrow by Katie
23 Oct 2003, 12:30 PM
A winged penis in a tank full of pirahanas.
on Behind My Blue Eyes (rough draft) by Mona Lisa
23 Oct 2003, 12:36 PM
God, you give me such a throbbing boner.
on some deleted poem
23 Oct 2003, 3:50 PM
The title seemed a touch inorganic to the piece, but nothing too critical.
on some deleted poem
27 Oct 2003, 8:07 PM
Have you tried the Peter funnel for men club? It works! Not only am I a member? I invented the fucking thing.
http://www.boners.com/grub/791295.html
http://www.boners.com/grub/791295.html
on some deleted poem
27 Oct 2003, 8:11 PM
hey kids guess which one's dark angel?
http://www.boners.com/grub/791259.html
None of them. The turn van didn't have a hydrolic hoist with matching jelly bowls. Hey did however make those monkey ears for his lover fuke u weeny which we see here wearing them.
http://www.boners.com/grub/791259.html
http://www.boners.com/grub/791259.html
None of them. The turn van didn't have a hydrolic hoist with matching jelly bowls. Hey did however make those monkey ears for his lover fuke u weeny which we see here wearing them.
http://www.boners.com/grub/791259.html
on EarthWaterAir - Hey! Look! IM MR FIRE! by Y2kSlamPoet
27 Oct 2003, 8:22 PM
on The World Is No Longer Silent by newdawnfades
27 Oct 2003, 8:27 PM
on some deleted poem
27 Oct 2003, 8:56 PM
I throw a red rose at your feet...soft as a breeze
on Voyeur looking glass by baphomet
30 Oct 2003, 10:00 AM
"As I wake I go to the window , there I focus my eyeâs on the poodle." pull your comma tight and pull the apostrophe out of "eye's".
"circler" is spelled circular
"with their ass" should be on their ass.
"He bends even more and I start to get stiff.
I can see the seams giving way for his pants to rip.
So I wait quiet, and then it goes.
And there lies low an behold.
he looks around to see if anyone saw
which tickled my fancy.
I leave the door window and
I head to the bed,
for I have finished my job.
I lay on back and think of what I seen.
Then I reach in and start rubbing the knob.
Voyeur of the year, join the club.
peep fiend . . ." Now little brother this is too vague? you must make it clearer for your readers in order for them to get what you're saying.
"circler" is spelled circular
"with their ass" should be on their ass.
"He bends even more and I start to get stiff.
I can see the seams giving way for his pants to rip.
So I wait quiet, and then it goes.
And there lies low an behold.
he looks around to see if anyone saw
which tickled my fancy.
I leave the door window and
I head to the bed,
for I have finished my job.
I lay on back and think of what I seen.
Then I reach in and start rubbing the knob.
Voyeur of the year, join the club.
peep fiend . . ." Now little brother this is too vague? you must make it clearer for your readers in order for them to get what you're saying.
on some deleted poem
30 Oct 2003, 10:04 AM
Too vague, even for you.
on Fulfilling the destiny by INTRANSIT
30 Oct 2003, 10:08 AM
That's odd? I read this same thing tattood upon
-=Dark_Angel=-'s reddening rump last week during one of our bi yearly Christian retreaties.
-=Dark_Angel=-'s reddening rump last week during one of our bi yearly Christian retreaties.
on Fulfilling the destiny by INTRANSIT
30 Oct 2003, 10:11 AM
The reason was, of course, acute vaginal terror brought on by a future tongue disease called MAIDS.
on She wishes by INTRANSIT
30 Oct 2003, 10:15 AM
Where did all your poems go?
on Dale Winton's Buttocks by Ya Kid K
30 Oct 2003, 12:40 PM
My idea of a late night toss. 10!
on Need For Speed by Earth Child
3 Nov 2003, 11:57 PM
Let me guess? Poetry is your passion outside of growing petunias.
on (pieces, peaces) by Patsy
3 Nov 2003, 10:42 PM
Isn't that a Clint Eastwood movie?
on some simplicity stings. by FreeFormFixation
4 Nov 2003, 1:09 AM
An encounter with a bearded old man using noxema as lubrication?
on vampirism extrapolated by FreeFormFixation
4 Nov 2003, 1:10 AM
Goerge Hamilton trying to get out of a tanning booth with a prehistoric saber toothed can opener?
on it's a new crayon by FreeFormFixation
4 Nov 2003, 1:15 AM
"whetting my earppatite" what?
Porus8 is a pumice felcher.
But you my friend would felch a Klingon.
Porus8 is a pumice felcher.
But you my friend would felch a Klingon.
on on a more positive note by calliope
4 Nov 2003, 1:18 AM
God is a pair of training wheels hanging up in some shed in Vermont watching the dust dance in a widows stale sun box.