Re: Tomorrow by Katie |
23-Oct-03/12:30 PM |
A winged penis in a tank full of pirahanas.
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Re: Behind My Blue Eyes (rough draft) by Mona Lisa |
23-Oct-03/12:36 PM |
God, you give me such a throbbing boner.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
23-Oct-03/3:50 PM |
The title seemed a touch inorganic to the piece, but nothing too critical.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
27-Oct-03/8:07 PM |
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27-Oct-03/8:11 PM |
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Re: EarthWaterAir - Hey! Look! IM MR FIRE! by Y2kSlamPoet |
27-Oct-03/8:22 PM |
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Re: The World Is No Longer Silent by newdawnfades |
27-Oct-03/8:27 PM |
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regarding some deleted poem... |
27-Oct-03/8:56 PM |
I throw a red rose at your feet...soft as a breeze
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Re: Voyeur looking glass by baphomet |
30-Oct-03/10:00 AM |
"As I wake I go to the window , there I focus my eyeâs on the poodle." pull your comma tight and pull the apostrophe out of "eye's".
"circler" is spelled circular
"with their ass" should be on their ass.
"He bends even more and I start to get stiff.
I can see the seams giving way for his pants to rip.
So I wait quiet, and then it goes.
And there lies low an behold.
he looks around to see if anyone saw
which tickled my fancy.
I leave the door window and
I head to the bed,
for I have finished my job.
I lay on back and think of what I seen.
Then I reach in and start rubbing the knob.
Voyeur of the year, join the club.
peep fiend . . ." Now little brother this is too vague? you must make it clearer for your readers in order for them to get what you're saying.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
30-Oct-03/10:04 AM |
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Re: Fulfilling the destiny by INTRANSIT |
30-Oct-03/10:08 AM |
That's odd? I read this same thing tattood upon
-=Dark_Angel=-'s reddening rump last week during one of our bi yearly Christian retreaties.
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Re: Fulfilling the destiny by INTRANSIT |
30-Oct-03/10:11 AM |
The reason was, of course, acute vaginal terror brought on by a future tongue disease called MAIDS.
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Re: She wishes by INTRANSIT |
30-Oct-03/10:15 AM |
Where did all your poems go?
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Re: Dale Winton's Buttocks by Ya Kid K |
30-Oct-03/12:40 PM |
My idea of a late night toss. 10!
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Re: (pieces, peaces) by Patsy |
3-Nov-03/10:42 PM |
Isn't that a Clint Eastwood movie?
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Re: Need For Speed by Earth Child |
3-Nov-03/11:57 PM |
Let me guess? Poetry is your passion outside of growing petunias.
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Re: some simplicity stings. by FreeFormFixation |
4-Nov-03/1:09 AM |
An encounter with a bearded old man using noxema as lubrication?
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Re: vampirism extrapolated by FreeFormFixation |
4-Nov-03/1:10 AM |
Goerge Hamilton trying to get out of a tanning booth with a prehistoric saber toothed can opener?
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Re: it's a new crayon by FreeFormFixation |
4-Nov-03/1:15 AM |
"whetting my earppatite" what?
Porus8 is a pumice felcher.
But you my friend would felch a Klingon.
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Re: on a more positive note by calliope |
4-Nov-03/1:18 AM |
God is a pair of training wheels hanging up in some shed in Vermont watching the dust dance in a widows stale sun box.
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