poemranker ::(pieces, peaces) by Patsy

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(pieces, peaces)

Member since 2003 · Posted 3 Nov 2003 · 3 comments

Nothing around here happens without my permission. space, taker: i'm sure you give but i'm not sure what. Shall i sacrifice some light for a lack of darkness? What we could do if we wanted to. Kites don't feel like this, even if they miss the ground. It's not a decent beauty if it excuses itself. (You can say whatever you want, butterscotch if you say it like that.) Me: No longer an open sore for you to gawk at (this is not a real poem, rather, an amalgamation of running the gamut over 3 years.)

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[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> 3-Nov-03/10:42 PM Reply
Isn't that a Clint Eastwood movie?
[8] deleted user 4-Nov-03/6:43 AM Reply
Nice individual lines
[9] basit_i 4-Jan-04/12:24 AM Reply
Again, this is possibly simply the fact of the near-full moon, but...intimations of the Other Side? or, to quote, "dustbunnies where there are none"?