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Death (Other) by etherealmaiden
Death disguised as a boy Sighted the girl with her toy And slowly walked toward the girl With blue eyes and golden curl And with poison lips Gave the girl her first kiss

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.4
Weighted score: 5.166884
Overall Rank: 5004
Posted: February 29, 2004 12:31 PM PST; Last modified: February 29, 2004 12:31 PM PST
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[6] meektiger15 @ 216.109.10.61 | 2-Mar-04/6:28 AM | Reply
This one is ok :)
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