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as you are (Free verse) by Adriaan Your reflection
is as beautiful
as you are
for its beauty
is your own
But it is
not as loveable
as you are
for its beauty
is its all
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Posted: March 20, 2005 12:59 PM PST; Last modified: February 6, 2006 7:26 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.166884 Overall Rank: 5043 Comments:
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Ranger @ 62.252.32.15
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6-Feb-06/8:21 AM
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Sweet enough.
Short and sweet.
That's very nice, I like it!
this is a lot deeper than it appears at first; it is not merely about a mirror image. the depth of a person is what he portrays succintly here, that there is more to love than the beauty by itself.
clever and poignant. 271 view(s)
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