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as you are

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Mar 2005 · Edited 6 Feb 2006 · 4 comments

Your reflection is as beautiful as you are for its beauty is your own But it is not as loveable as you are for its beauty is its all

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[8] Ranger 6-Feb-06/8:21 AM Reply

Sweet enough.

[8] Angelicasassy 6-Feb-06/8:56 AM Reply

Short and sweet.

[8] drnick 6-Feb-06/11:45 PM Reply

That's very nice, I like it!

[8] lmp 31-May-06/11:57 AM Reply

this is a lot deeper than it appears at first; it is not merely about a mirror image. the depth of a person is what he portrays succintly here, that there is more to love than the beauty by itself.

clever and poignant.