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as you are (Free verse) by Adriaan

Your reflection is as beautiful as you are for its beauty is your own But it is not as loveable as you are for its beauty is its all

lmp 31-May-06/11:57 AM
this is a lot deeper than it appears at first; it is not merely about a mirror image. the depth of a person is what he portrays succintly here, that there is more to love than the beauty by itself.

clever and poignant.




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