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vampirism extrapolated

Member since 2003 · Posted 3 Nov 2003 · 3 comments

Thanks! and fangs went straight in my skin. neck knives red drops stained scarf chain locks. what did i do? did i hurt you? hey! and spit slips down ripped eye-lips.

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[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> 4-Nov-03/1:10 AM Reply
Goerge Hamilton trying to get out of a tanning booth with a prehistoric saber toothed can opener?
[7] Shuushin 4-Nov-03/8:23 AM Reply
I just did in an excercise in my programming class where I had the students write a program that by simulating a vampire needing to feed everynight, and thereby converting another human into vampire - how long would it take to convert all the humans into vampires.

Turns out it takes just about a month to convert 6 billion people.

one of the "proofs" that vampires don't exist - but it makes a few arbitrary (and silly) assumptions.

as for the poem here - I feel like I need to munch on it more, but I do so hesitantly because there isn't much room for interpretation (not quite getting it).

I do like some of the bits in it:
"neck knives
red drops
stained scarf" is cool.
[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> › Shuushin 4-Nov-03/9:10 AM Reply
I believe this poem is about Jesus feeding the malnourished.