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Fulfilling the destiny (Free verse) by INTRANSIT It happened.
For no apparent reason
the male psyche changed,
and men stopped doing
unnacceptable things.
They stopped going to strip clubs.
They stopped going to hookers.
They stopped buying porn in all forms.
No movies. No magazines. No peep shows.
Not just a few men. All men.
And all successive men would be born "neutral".
The shift didn't stop there.
Men stopped looking at women in any
manner of sexuality.
They stopped needing, or even wanting sex.
There was no sex in marriages,
and men stopped accepting favors and hired
according to capability.
They stopped donating at sperm banks,
and rendered their testicles
non-manufactory.
Up the ladder:
Three Skinheads
Down the ladder:
Sauvignon
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Posted: October 30, 2003 10:01 AM PST; Last modified: October 30, 2003 10:01 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.345782 Overall Rank: 3429 Comments:
The reason was, of course, acute vaginal terror brought on by a future tongue disease called MAIDS.
Christian maids? never heard of 'em.
GLAIDS.
As long as you use glad hands, they're not a problem.
Maxxillofacialangiointrauterinedeloposis syndrome.
also known as Bannannabigscrosis.
10!- for throwing Cro-Magnon to a yet, more primordial form!
Decent idea presented in rather generic fashion.
Why would I want to beautify the end of the world? And as you have mentioned, it is only a (decent) idea. Not great. just decent. I'm still waiting for my mediocrity code. lol.
I wasn't asking you to beautify the end of the world as you like. I said you had a decent idea and I believe that is worth something. I just think the poem in style is rather generic.
Style as in hugging the left wall? Break it up more? Or try some coloration of lines: They stopped going to hookers. There was no more night business on the corners.
I, for one, will never stop going to hookers.
I was goint to use the solar storm as a "reason". Bastard Horus beat me to it.
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-=Dark_Angel=-'s reddening rump last week during one of our bi yearly Christian retreaties.