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Fulfilling the destiny (Free verse) by INTRANSIT
It happened. For no apparent reason the male psyche changed, and men stopped doing unnacceptable things. They stopped going to strip clubs. They stopped going to hookers. They stopped buying porn in all forms. No movies. No magazines. No peep shows. Not just a few men. All men. And all successive men would be born "neutral". The shift didn't stop there. Men stopped looking at women in any manner of sexuality. They stopped needing, or even wanting sex. There was no sex in marriages, and men stopped accepting favors and hired according to capability. They stopped donating at sperm banks, and rendered their testicles non-manufactory.

Up the ladder: I Am Not What I've Done
Down the ladder: Amy

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Overall Rank: 3424
Posted: October 30, 2003 10:01 AM PST; Last modified: October 30, 2003 10:01 AM PST
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[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.116.54 | 30-Oct-03/10:08 AM | Reply
That's odd? I read this same thing tattood upon
-=Dark_Angel=-'s reddening rump last week during one of our bi yearly Christian retreaties.
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.139 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 30-Oct-03/10:11 AM | Reply
Was it all on one cheek? Or spread 'cross in linear fashion.
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.116.54 > INTRANSIT | 30-Oct-03/10:12 AM | Reply
That's just it. He only has one.
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.116.54 | 30-Oct-03/10:11 AM | Reply
The reason was, of course, acute vaginal terror brought on by a future tongue disease called MAIDS.
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.139 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 30-Oct-03/10:12 AM | Reply
Christian maids? never heard of 'em.
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.116.54 > INTRANSIT | 30-Oct-03/10:14 AM | Reply
GLAIDS.
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.139 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 30-Oct-03/10:16 AM | Reply
As long as you use glad hands, they're not a problem.
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.139 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 30-Oct-03/10:15 AM | Reply
Maxxillofacialangiointrauterinedeloposis syndrome.

also known as Bannannabigscrosis.
[10] kingit @ 67.68.48.37 | 30-Oct-03/2:55 PM | Reply
10!- for throwing Cro-Magnon to a yet, more primordial form!
[4] poetandknowit @ 65.101.210.212 | 30-Oct-03/6:39 PM | Reply
Decent idea presented in rather generic fashion.
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.209.41 > poetandknowit | 31-Oct-03/8:40 AM | Reply
Why would I want to beautify the end of the world? And as you have mentioned, it is only a (decent) idea. Not great. just decent. I'm still waiting for my mediocrity code. lol.
[4] poetandknowit @ 65.101.213.93 > INTRANSIT | 31-Oct-03/8:51 AM | Reply
I wasn't asking you to beautify the end of the world as you like. I said you had a decent idea and I believe that is worth something. I just think the poem in style is rather generic.
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.209.41 > poetandknowit | 31-Oct-03/8:55 AM | Reply
Style as in hugging the left wall? Break it up more? Or try some coloration of lines: They stopped going to hookers. There was no more night business on the corners.
[4] poetandknowit @ 65.101.213.93 > INTRANSIT | 31-Oct-03/9:01 AM | Reply
I, for one, will never stop going to hookers.
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.209.41 > poetandknowit | 31-Oct-03/9:05 AM | Reply
I was goint to use the solar storm as a "reason". Bastard Horus beat me to it.
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