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Fulfilling the destiny (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

It happened. For no apparent reason the male psyche changed, and men stopped doing unnacceptable things. They stopped going to strip clubs. They stopped going to hookers. They stopped buying porn in all forms. No movies. No magazines. No peep shows. Not just a few men. All men. And all successive men would be born "neutral". The shift didn't stop there. Men stopped looking at women in any manner of sexuality. They stopped needing, or even wanting sex. There was no sex in marriages, and men stopped accepting favors and hired according to capability. They stopped donating at sperm banks, and rendered their testicles non-manufactory.

INTRANSIT 31-Oct-03/8:55 AM
Style as in hugging the left wall? Break it up more? Or try some coloration of lines: They stopped going to hookers. There was no more night business on the corners.




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