Re: The Flight of Childhood by Ellie95	2-Mar-03/5:06 PM
That only works for humans.
Re: respirometrics by bunniesnangels	5-Mar-03/1:26 PM
Clean heat.
Re: A Buncha Dungeons and Dragons Haiku by razorgrin	9-Mar-03/10:18 AM
With the sword of sharpness and a cloak of invisibility... I subdued the displacer beast, and kept it's treasure.
Re: forgiveness by elizabethann	9-Mar-03/10:21 AM
Good.
Re: forgiveness by elizabethann	9-Mar-03/10:21 AM
For you, that is.
Re: Floating in mindless clutter of words by wLeBlancw	9-Mar-03/10:31 AM
Who does that? Your legions of fans? Sounds more like you reassuring yourself that your penis still has a chance of touching a vagina (a live one). SHHHHHH. It's okay... You should dumb it down a little more then this. Chicks dig simpletons with unobtainable goals likegetting laid outside of the shower and one's own gene pool. (cousins, young aunts, lonely mother's on nebutal). I know why i hate jews... Why do the French again? Oh yeah, they own France too.
Re: I cannot take this shit(please comment and critique) by TrulyUnique0642	9-Mar-03/10:39 AM
Yeah... With my foot on the back of your head I say I....L, hate your fucking guts, through love i mean. That's when i motion to the waitor for the check. I've rented soft porn better then this.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Mar-03/10:58 AM
"So why try, so goddamm hard There's no point, I'm geeting hurt Cos all you do, is ignore me This is for you, your victory" fix getting and make all of your cos' because. "This is for you, your victory This is for you, your victory This is for you, your victory This is for you, your victory." compress this stanza to one sentence to For you, this is, your meaning of victory
Re: A Best Friend by Birdman42s	9-Mar-03/11:04 AM
Clearly a poem for, and about, homosexuality. 10!
Re: Best Present Ever by razorgrin	9-Mar-03/11:06 AM
lol.
Re: To You (Please Critique and comment) by TrulyUnique0642	9-Mar-03/11:23 AM
It scares me more to think of me with you.
Re: Fireworks on the Island by horus8	9-Mar-03/11:38 AM
What you've done here is described current world events and future events by using a story from your past, bridging the gap of time and predicting the future. You should call this 'wheelchairs' don't float. Wet bushes don't burn. The reflection off of your eyes, timeless. I love you. I love you James. I love you Settle. I love you Hedwig, Nicole, Christy, Melissa, Jesus, Gumout, Tapioca, David, Goliath, Charmin, Sheila, Deborah, tanya handrinos, gayboyseverywhere, wadded money, warmpiss, plastic explosives, briaana, megan, cindy, paula, paul, pa, but i hate the Getty. Terrible Architecture. If I left anyone out... Take it up with my fucking publicist. Oh and remember this i don't need oxygen anymore. i breathe fingernails and gunpowder. I am GAyTAN!l
Re: The day Pan out-played Apollo by Bachus	13-Mar-03/8:42 PM
In terms of psychic warfare? that was Roman Polanski's Quaalude.
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Mar-03/9:11 PM
It was born out of Porte and a vanerial wart, He claimed that it was a profile.
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Mar-03/11:10 PM
Did it ever cross your mind that perhaps she's just stupid? i mean really i have no sympathy for here here family or the prophet of the bums they should all be abducted as soon as possible. That girl is mentally three, maybe her nipples her vulva and her turd cutter came back a woman, but there's nada upstairs. No storm, no activity, Daddy's little girl. Besides anyone who has read the book of latter day saints can barely chuckle without saying out loud, "are you fucking serious?" Serves them all right, Who's ever heard of such a pathetic religion, so unimaginative and preposterous it's practically beyond normal. The only thing one can gather from the story is Mormon's need to stop breeding.
Re: The Rift by Bachus	18-Mar-03/2:52 AM
My brother i send you out with love and forgive you for your hatred of yourself. You have done the imposible and walked away, let's go write an album for ten months you've poemranked yourself to death. stand proud you wrote your mind without lying to yourself. god has always loved you, why have you forsaken him? You are worth it. Let go, Sleep my brother, for our mother is lost but we are found! the darkness approaching we should help these men brave. Focus your energy and smite the ignorant with their own tail chasing. now is the time to concentrate. tomorrow, you will awaken, anew.
Re: Good to the Last Drop by Bonehiss	19-Mar-03/8:51 PM
Yes. YESA!
Re: Sublime Street Morals by thepinkbunnyofdoom	4-Apr-03/5:53 PM
I smoked the grass on the otherside and it was bedder doo.
Re: Sublime Street Morals by thepinkbunnyofdoom	4-Apr-03/7:47 PM
I smoked the grass on the otherside and it was bedder doo.
Re: An Ode to a Harvard man by bondjedi	17-Apr-03/1:18 PM
This is actually an 'ode' to what you think 'odes' are, but in actuality it's not. This is a roman numeraled other with no rhyme scheme no structured pattern and a dull theme. Not to mention dislocated sentences, paragraphs and punctuation. Congradulation!